In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some societies,

children

are often encouraged to try their best if they want to achieve something. Putting emphasis on

hard

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working

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would certainly improve

children

's ability but there will

also

have some drawbacks. On the one hand,

this

principle will definitely

benefits

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kids both in

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way and

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practical way. Once

children

understand that they can achieve anything as long as they work hard, they will be inspired and motivated.

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is means

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that

children

get a good score in school after they try their best to study, they will work even hard and spend more time on study for the future, as they truly believe that

hard

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working

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pays back.

In addition

, if these enter the job market or encounter more practical problems when they grow ,

such

as financial crisis, they will

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likely to give up and more likely to stick up with it.

On the other hand

, there are some disadvantages to having

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this

idea to

children

.

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at

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all, it would largely diminish the careless and joyful time of

children

once they had told

this

thought too early.

Additionally

,

children

tend to pay more attention to the results and less attention to

process

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of how they achieve it, which is detrimental to the development of

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mental health

Secondly

, if

children

go through some failures after they put so much strength

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some goals, they may be discouraged and frustrating which will lead to a negative situation for them. In conclusion, motivating

children

by telling them that they can do

anythig

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anything

if they try hard enough has some benefits for their future development,

however

, it will inevitably

poses

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negative

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effect

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on them.