Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit

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It is a common belief that all
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newly
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constructed
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in core
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should be managed by
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.
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the contrary, some
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believe that its designs need to be freed to the
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who invested and built the institutions. I am of the opinion that newly built constructions should be controlled by
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following
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reasons.
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with, constructing
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in big
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cost a lot.
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, the
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would adopt an expedient in
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way in order to invest less money to build provided that
governments
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let the
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of the
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to
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manage wholely.
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, many building
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are likely to construct that not right and less secure for public
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unless
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involve
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in the process of
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constructions
. On top of that, not certificated
buildings
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will be hazardous for citizens who live there in
cities
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. In order to protect
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from dangerous possibilities,
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should intervene and make several instructions and policies that can make safer
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in society. It is evident that delegating all the management to the
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for constructing
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by themselves will lead to negative consequences.
People
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generally have some greed and eagerness when it comes a time to deal with money. Constructing
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are all about finances. For these reasons,
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need to control
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regulations.
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, some publics think that
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who manage overall
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should take
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control on designing because those are the one who owns the
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by investing a great amount of money including taxes.
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claims
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that the
owners
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should have all the rights to build including all the preferences on designing a building.
However
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,
this
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idea cannot be resolved the problems that might occur due to unguaranteed instructions if the
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do not take part in
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constructions
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construction
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of
buildings
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. To sum up, the
governments
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should take part in constructing
buildings
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because of the problems that are more likely to face during
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.
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are
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part of citizens' lives.
Buildings
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should be managed by guaranteed institutions because even little mistakes in
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will
threat
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the citizens' lives.
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