Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit
It is a common belief that all
of
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the newly
buildings
in core Use synonyms
cities
should be managed by Use synonyms
governments
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the contrary, some Change preposition
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people
believe that its designs need to be freed to the Use synonyms
owners
who invested and built the institutions. I am of the opinion that newly built constructions should be controlled by Use synonyms
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for
following
reasons.
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the following
To begin
with, constructing Linking Words
buildings
in big Use synonyms
cities
cost a lot. Use synonyms
In other words
, the Linking Words
owners
would adopt an expedient in Use synonyms
negative
way in order to invest less money to build provided that Change the article
a negative
governments
let the Use synonyms
owners
of the Use synonyms
buildings
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to
manage wholely. Change the verb form
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As a result
, many building Linking Words
owners
are likely to construct that not right and less secure for public Use synonyms
people
unless Use synonyms
governments
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involve
in the process of Change the form of the verb
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contructions
. On top of that, not certificated Correct your spelling
constructions
buildings
will be hazardous for citizens who live there in Use synonyms
cities
. In order to protect Use synonyms
people
from dangerous possibilities, Use synonyms
government
should intervene and make several instructions and policies that can make safer Add an article
the government
buildings
in society.
It is evident that delegating all the management to the Use synonyms
owners
for constructing Use synonyms
buildings
by themselves will lead to negative consequences. Use synonyms
People
generally have some greed and eagerness when it comes a time to deal with money. Constructing Use synonyms
buildings
are all about finances. For these reasons, Use synonyms
government
need to control Add an article
the government
with
regulations. Change preposition
apply
In contrast
, some publics think that Linking Words
owners
who manage overall Use synonyms
buildings
should take Use synonyms
a
control on designing because those are the one who owns the Remove the article
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buildings
by investing a great amount of money including taxes. Use synonyms
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is why some Linking Words
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claims
that the Change the verb form
claim
owners
should have all the rights to build including all the preferences on designing a building. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
idea cannot be resolved the problems that might occur due to unguaranteed instructions if the Linking Words
governments
do not take part in Use synonyms
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the constructions
constructions
of Fix the agreement mistake
construction
buildings
.
To sum up, the Use synonyms
governments
should take part in constructing Use synonyms
buildings
because of the problems that are more likely to face during Use synonyms
constructions
. Fix the agreement mistake
construction
Cities
are Use synonyms
the
part of citizens' lives. Correct article usage
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Buildings
should be managed by guaranteed institutions because even little mistakes in Use synonyms
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threat
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