Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit

It is a common belief that all

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constructed

buildings

in core

cities

should be managed by

governments

.

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the contrary, some

people

believe that its designs need to be freed to the

owners

who invested and built the institutions. I am of the opinion that newly built constructions should be controlled by

governments

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reasons.

To begin

with, constructing

buildings

in big

cities

cost a lot.

In other words

, the

owners

would adopt an expedient in

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way in order to invest less money to build provided that

governments

let the

owners

of the

buildings

to

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manage wholely.

As a result

, many building

owners

are likely to construct that not right and less secure for public

people

unless

governments

involve

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in the process of

contructions

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constructions

. On top of that, not certificated

buildings

will be hazardous for citizens who live there in

cities

. In order to protect

people

from dangerous possibilities,

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should intervene and make several instructions and policies that can make safer

buildings

in society. It is evident that delegating all the management to the

owners

for constructing

buildings

by themselves will lead to negative consequences.

People

generally have some greed and eagerness when it comes a time to deal with money. Constructing

buildings

are all about finances. For these reasons,

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need to control

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regulations.

In contrast

, some publics think that

owners

who manage overall

buildings

should take

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control on designing because those are the one who owns the

buildings

by investing a great amount of money including taxes.

This

is why some

people

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that the

owners

should have all the rights to build including all the preferences on designing a building.

However

,

this

idea cannot be resolved the problems that might occur due to unguaranteed instructions if the

governments

do not take part in

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constructions

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of

buildings

. To sum up, the

governments

should take part in constructing

buildings

because of the problems that are more likely to face during

constructions

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.

Cities

are

the

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part of citizens' lives.

Buildings

should be managed by guaranteed institutions because even little mistakes in

constructing

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will

threat

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the citizens' lives.