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Nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed what is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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In the 21st century, the field of education brings enormous changes
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 the
parents
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children
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 norms. In
this
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the given statement and I strongly support that pressurising students for study generate a negative impact on their development.
To begin
, there are many
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underling
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reason
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reasons
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 for
parents
 to pressure their
children
 to learn.
Firstly
, now education
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 as a status symbol in which, getting
good
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 position is important rather than
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empowerment.
Secondly
, private schools and management introduced competition among students because more winners mean more profit in their pocket.
Thirdly
, due to increasing population and
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 employment
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 made a stressful mind among
parents
 for the future of their
children
.
In addition
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 circumstances made the results of
parents
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children
 with others.
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However
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less confidence and
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of
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children
.
For example
, Swiss educationist Jean
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 in his research
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point
points
plain
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children's
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potentiality
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 to study. Apparently, every child
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 positive reinforcement
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 their studies and it
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 their learning capacity. To illustrate
this
, Abraham Maslow ,one of the famous humanistic
psychologist
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 in the world suggested that punishment and compelling study destroy the natural learning ability of human life. Reportedly, when
parents
 compelling their
children
, it will negatively influence their physical ability because tension makes the production of unwanted hormones in their body.
On the other hand
,
parents
 teach their
children
 how to overcome difficulties in life and they need to support any challenging situation. In conclusion, every
children
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 is unique and they have their own
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 talents. As a parent, everyone should understand their
children
's ability and
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encourage them to succeed
their
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 life happily.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Excessive pressure
  • Academic achievements
  • Professional success
  • Secure future
  • Social comparison
  • Competitive environment
  • Psychological impact
  • Stress and anxiety
  • Resilience
  • Work ethic
  • Emotional well-being
  • Supportive parenting
  • Achievements
  • Life skills
  • Balance
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