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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#television #life #sense #community #people
In
this
 today world, watching
television
 is becoming a major threat to our family relations, rather than talking to our family or visiting
people
 we just watch
television
.
However
, I totally agree
on
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this
 statement and in
this
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 I will be explaining how
this
television
 can become a threat to our relations.
Firstly
, they will lack
sense
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a sense
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 of communicating with the community or
ur
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our
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 household while viewing
television
.
For instance
, those
people
 who don't go out in the community,
they
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will feel shy when they move out in
the
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society to talk to others. Sadly, they will lose their sense of communication over age,
Moreover
, they will
also
 find it very hard to even talk to their parents.
Therefore
, they should talk to their household
instead
 of spending hours in front of
television
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the television
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.
Secondly
, they will lack character development in them in
such
 a way that they won't know how to interact with the
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children
children's
childrens
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, elders and teachers.
For example
, children of
same
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 age group have different maturity levels in
such
 a way that despite,
of
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being of the same age they will not know how to tackle problems while
,
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 it will be easy for others to do the same thing.
Therefore
 they should visit
people
 and places while wasting hours in front of
television
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. In conclusion, they should spend more time with friends and family
instead
 of
television
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on television
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 and they should
also
 visit
people
 outside and places
neerby
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nearby
 .
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