Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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is important for

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success

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in any

sport

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while the contribution of mental tenacity towards reaching a goal of an athlete can't be ignored

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as well

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, the role of physical training on the

perfomance

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performance

a sportsperson and

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the positives that mental stability bring out in them will help us to form an opinion. On one hand , some people believe that practice makes a man perfect ,

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applies to

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strength

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training which makes our body fit for any sort of championship .

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the

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successful

players

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follow a strict

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training regime so as to perform better . In lack of

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training

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they often tend to get tired sooner and often injure themselves .

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it's important that physical training is considered to be one of the key factors for

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in any

sports

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.

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, mental health helps us to stay determined and

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better,

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fetching better results in any form of

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. Even the

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, not at

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of their physical form perform better if mentally strong, sports psychology helps

players

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stay mentally fit and stay stronger during pressure .

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, even after been beaten badly by the Australian cricket team in the very

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match of the world cup , Indian cricket bounced back stronger only due to the

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and determination they had to win.

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strength

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had no role to play in

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case and

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entirely depended on mental tenacity.

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mental health

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players

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to

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their physical health . Mental stability is of paramount relevance in any

sport

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any

athelete

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athlete

can lose even the easiest of the games.In the nutshell ,as much as physical

strength

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is crucial for any

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, the role of mental training is undeniable in the

success

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of any champion.

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my opinion ,mental

strength

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is much more important in the

success

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of

players

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than physical

strength

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.