Some people think that universities should assign students to share dormitory rooms. Others think that students should be able to choose their roommates on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Past decade earth changed evolved so much.Even in education
such
as youngsters take there schooling in locally but nowadays folk travel through other countries to study.However
, this
comes with the problem junior want to choose their roommates but universities
assign their rooms.This
essay will discuss both views.
First
foremost, having a roommate is such
like
a family maybe even more.When Replace the word
as
universities
just randomly chose their partners
not showing their interest usually won't fit.As a ,result
it will be difficult to focus on their study and fail their exams.On the other ,handpicking who compatible their personality or interest student degree, a grade will increase and focus on their projects even more.,Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
,
Change the punctuation
apply
Furthermore
youngsters will socialize even more which means it has so many beneficial things.
Add a comma
,Furthermore
Nevertheless
, It will take so much time to wait to pick their partners
.These days universities
students
number increased so much, especially international students
approximately 1 thousand to 10 thousand.It will so long for wait 1 thousand people their decisions.After taking all people in result they need to analyze it because some the people may be chosen by 2 persons then
universities
ask their person to listen
his idea and demanding work.Add the preposition
tolisten
Moreover
, universities
had so many things to other than such
as planing semester and teachers, students
allocation.
In conclusion,it will take time to for waiting
their Add the preposition
forwaiting
partners
and difficult to analyze their roommates.however
it may be complicated, it has so many benefits to their grades, the project even their social skills.,,
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apply
Personally
I am one of the Add a comma
,Personally
students
it is hard to deal with who has own different interest or personality and wish universities
give opportunities to choose our partners
it would be awesome.Submitted by btfemx on
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