Introduction
The rise of large corporations has led to a fundamental shift in the workforce towards large businesses. The chief advantages of
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Body paragraph 1
Proponents of big business can point to career advancement and the variety of roles within a large company. Small businesses, by their nature, draw on a limited possible source of revenue that naturally caps promotions. Large
companies
have nearly unlimited profit potential and can Use synonyms
thus
employ a large number of managers, executives and other high-salaried positions. Linking Words
Moreover
, a small business is more likely to be limited in the number of roles, while larger Linking Words
companies
will have departments ranging from legal to marketing to research and development to human resources, all of which are potential destinations for motivated employees.Use synonyms
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The disadvantages of these large
companies
relate less directly to individuals and more to society at large. Use synonyms
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there are more quality jobs available in big Linking Words
companies
, the disappearance of small, local entrepreneurs means that capital becomes concentrated in the company’s chief shareholders, who are often living in other countries and already extremely rich. Over time Use synonyms
this
has led to the division of wealth that defines the 21st century. Linking Words
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, as executive decisions become Linking Words
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removed from local communities it is harder to regulate large Linking Words
companies
. A good example of Use synonyms
this
would be the environmental cost of drilling for oil and extracting natural gas, which hurts local residents but continues unabated because those in authority are unaffected.Linking Words
Conclusion
In conclusion, the opportunities provided by big business do not outweigh the negative potential for all of society when power becomes concentrated and distant. It is
therefore
important to check the reach of corporations and empower individuals.Linking Words