Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

Nowadays, there is much debate around

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between

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. Some people prove that

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develops

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better and at the same time other

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of people believe that cooperative

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adapt faster to society in future.

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reasoned solution. On the one hand,

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of

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in students is very important, especially if

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encourages motivation in a long run. In our competitive society to be taught as a strong and purposeful person is very valuable.

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, excellent students can be a positive sample for the group of

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that do not believe in their talents or

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self-confident enough if

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between them accompanies by praise and faith.

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,

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among

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is vital too, because it gives a great opportunity to learn how

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a member of the team and perhaps become a leader in future.

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encourages self-confidence, open-minding and creativity,

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which work in

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are more helpful and communicated.

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students which take part in some

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work together as one team achieve high scores mostly. To sum up, in my opinion,

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and

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are equally important for

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’s upbringing and help kids to become adapted for modern society. As long both options have a positive impact they can be introduced into the parenting process.