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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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At present
people
 seem to
attracted
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 to the usage of different forms of
medicines
 which seem to be inefficient
therefore
, it may be hazardous to health.
However
, I do agree that the usage of improper alternative medications may have a negative impact on health.
To begin
 with,
people
are mislead
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 by their friends or families
therefore
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, leading to trust their recommendation of
medicines
 which are not precise for their conditions.
On the other hand
, some
people
 assume what is best for them on their own without consulting doctors or
physicans
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physicians
.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
people
 refuse to spend more money on consultation rather than taking an option
which
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that
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 might be dangerous by adopting alternative forms of medicine. In my point of view,
people
 should never
hesiate
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hesitate
 to visit the doctors
first
 before taking on any medication as they are ineffective without proper dosage of the
medicines
, due to the assumptions of types of
medicines
.
Awarness
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Awareness
 campaigns should be conducted to prevent
this
 trend of using various forms of
medicines
 on their own.
Finally
to
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 sum up,
this
 trend should be abolished as it creates a
nevative
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negative
 impact on health care and
people
 should avoid trusting their own instincts when it comes down to
medicines
 whereas, the government can take
incharge
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in charge
charge
 of
such
 preventions by setting up new rules and
guideliness
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guidelines
 in chemist shops to
bannish
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banish
burnish
 providing
medicines
 without the doctor's prescription.
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