one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In the past few years, medical care is constantly on the rise, people are benefited by taking medical services, and experience long life.
This
situation has some positive aspects; Linking Words
also
has some drawbacks. All these will explore in the ensuring essay.
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To begin
with, success in medical aids can Linking Words
be quickly fix
long-term health diseases, creating a more flexible body for lifelong. Change the verb form
be quickly fixed
In particular
, regular medical problems nowadays can easily Linking Words
overcome
, as patients have fewer difficulties in their bodies than in the past. Add a missing verb
be overcome
For example
, the major cancer problem is now being tackled through therapy; Linking Words
as a result
, Linking Words
this
gives patients more time to survive. Perhaps another key consideration is good fitness gives everyone hope of being together, Linking Words
such
as, old persons want to pass their time with grandchildren, and it seems to help their grandchildren learn something special like tradition, Linking Words
this
helps all generations because many busy parents could not share their life experiences with their children’s.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
although
improving medical care is effective for longevity, we cannot always rely on medical services as it is costly. Linking Words
Firstly
, in Linking Words
this
era medical system is very expensive, which means it is not possible for everyone to take any treatment at any time. Linking Words
For instance
, older people suffer medical problems, especially chronic illnesses like diabetes and imbalance blood pressure that can be solved by following Linking Words
natural
and healthy Correct article usage
a natural
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life-style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
In addition
, if the old people are not working, they will have no savings and pensions to pay for their lifestyle, medicine and treatments. Linking Words
Secondly
, as the population grows, governments face difficulties in spending money in the proper way Linking Words
then
it is affecting other sectors as the future population of the county. In light of the foregoing, we will find various disadvantages with Linking Words
this
topic but there Linking Words
has
more advantages.
To conclude, the increase in life expectancy has disadvantages like costly services and overpopulation, but advantages Change the verb form
have
such
as fighting Linking Words
with
diseases and good health exceed drawbacks.Change preposition
apply
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