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Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society and others think young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #traditions #society #individuals
Nowadays, many individuals believe that following the
traditions
by
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 youngsters is essential. But the opponents point out that
young
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 generation
have
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 a free right. In the following
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paragraphs
, I will discuss both sides of
this
 notion and explain the importance
freedom
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. On the one hand, each country has its own
traditions
 values and
customs
. The traditional
princeples
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principles
 of society help to bring
people
 together. The humans who claim out the importance of
traditions
 between young
people
 do so because it
contribute
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 to
connect
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 youngsters to their
ancentors
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ancestors
 through
traditions
.
Moreover
, due to the traditional
principles
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 the young generation can learn about the history of their country and nation's
customs
.
For instance
, Kazakh
people
 are the most hospitable humans in Central Asia, and their tradition of giving the best place and food to their
guest
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 can teach children about respect
to
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 others.
One
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 the other hand, today is the
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twenty
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first
 century and
people
 as
the
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youngsters have a right to follow
traditions
 or not.
Additionally
, the
customs
 have changed a lot in the past few decades due to the significant improvements and rapid globalization. It means that
young
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 generation is able to create and provide
the
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new
customs
 to their relatives in order to show the modern side of values.
Nevertheless
, the traditional values cannot be replaced by modern
traditions
,
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 but can be observed and utilized by elders.
For example
,
although
 humankind in Kazakhstan
honors
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traditions
, humans are always open to the new proposals given by their children and grandchildren. In
conslusion
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conclusion
, the right of following the nations'
traditions
 should be given to every young person, even if some
people
 are aware
otherwise
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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  • Finally
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  • In general

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