A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Aman, I hope you are doing fine. I got your letter yesterday, in which you mentioned that you are making a plan for camping tout on
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summer vacation.
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, I want to say thank you to you for trusting me and asking me for advice. I think you should go and enjoy
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summer. Camping is a very stimulant outdoor activity, in which you will get a chance to see the wildlife and their habitat from nearby. Staying in camp with other people is exciting and you always want to explore wild animals,
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is the time you can complete your willingness. You can
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go fishing and swimming in a nearby lake. Apart from
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, there is some disadvantage too as you couldn't find a restaurant or ant food plaza near there, you have to cook by yourself. Along with, weather conditions are harsh sometimes, so you should know how to deal with them. I am
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on my summer vacation; I would love to join it. I will send you the
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details
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as meeting point, tour booking, tour guide, etc. See you soon. With best regards, Kirandeep Kaur
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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