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Some people think that the increasing use of computer and mobile phones nowadays has unwanted effects on the young people reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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 modern technologies like computers and mobile phones, people believe in unwanted effects on youngsters' reading and writing skills. Modern people
use
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 formation of word's rather
then
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 using a full word which I believe affects their verbal skillset. In my essay, I will be discussing a note on
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argument
 and will provide my opinion.
Firstly
, most young individuals
use
 the simplest sets of words that we generally do not find in proper
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. We obviously can not observe
such
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abbreviations
 in text book's or any reading material which might not only
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effect
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 their writing skills;
however
, might cause trouble understanding words while reading too.
For instance
,
use
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'ND'
instead
 of 'and' or 'UR'
instead
 of 'you are' while texting on
mobile
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a mobile
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 device. Albeit, it might be used for informal conversation, it will surely impact the written talent in future. With personal experience, I have always used
such
 expressions in my messages;
therefore
, it was difficult for me at work while drafting
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client
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.
On the other hand
, in agreement
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 the above statement, there are some useful
softwares
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software
 available on computer's that help improve
the
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writing and reading.
For example
,
Grammerly
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Grammarly
, Auto-correct and Vocabulary Mater are great
softwares
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software
 that might come in handy for spelling correction. Most office employee's and author's at present tend to take help from
such
 technologies for improvement. There
are
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 a wide range of
such
 developments that are useful for present mankind to take advantage of. It is important to explore
such
 options and
use
 them to gain knowledge. In conclusion, I feel that recent developments of
computer
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computers
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 and mobile
phone
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phones
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 has
its
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 effects on youngsters' communication capabilities;
however
, we cannot argue on the fact that multiple skill development programmes are just one click away because of today's technology. It completely depends on an individual if they want to take advantage or disadvantage.
Hence
, I do not completely agree nor disagree with the
arguement
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argument
.
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