Some реорlе believe that there should Ье fixed punishments for each type о/ crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances оf an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding оn the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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society needs discipline. To survive in
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society, one must follow the rules and regulations. The
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who violate those rules should be punished. Some argue that there should be specified
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for each kind of
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, some believe that punishment should be given after considering the circumstances and motivation for committing the
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views will be discussed. It is asserted that the punishment should be fixed for each type of
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. It is the right way to keep
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under control from involving in
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illegal activities. Because the youth are more prone to participate in the crimes, if there are certain strict
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they would at least think before doing something wrong. If there are no fixed
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in the rule book for committing certain crimes,
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always look for loopholes to get out without any
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always happens with rich
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and higher officials who cover their tracks of
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using their influence and money.
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, the
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can be committed in
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circumstances to save themselves from others.
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, there is
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a girl
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being molested by a
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, in that situation the girl will act only to save herself from that
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, in
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process the
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may get hurt or killed. In
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situation, the girl should not be punished for saving herself from that
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who is trying to destroy her life.
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only for women but no one should be punished for self-defence. All in all,
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should be frightened to commit crimes, so there should be strict
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, there should be different
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for
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who did not intend to commit
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crime
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a crime
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but did it in inevitable circumstances. The law should consider the motivation behind committing the
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before giving the punishment and be strict at
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time.
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