You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: • Details about the conference • Why you want your colleague to give the presentation • What arrangement you will do for this conference

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am arranging a conference on “Sexual harassment at workplace”’ and want you to present on

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topic. The conference will be for 2 days

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week, and it will have notable speakers across various organizations. As you are one of the key stakeholders from the HR department so it will be great if you can share your valuable insights here. Let me explain to you in more detail.

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, I reached out to Mr Ben, as he is heading the department, but he suggested your name. I had been informed that you are handling

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sensitive matter with great expertise;

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, your participation as a speaker will add more value.

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, our company was

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rewarded

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year in

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category.

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, I believe you are doing wonders in your job and should share it with the outside world. Could you please let me know if you need any special equipment or stationery items for your presentation? I am taking care of the logistics part as well;

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, got numerous requests from various speakers. Please let me know your requirements in advance. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanking you. Yours faithfully Shreya

abhinaba.deTue Aug 03 2021

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

209 words

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