2. In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measure could be taken to prevent this?

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development flourished and the declining quality of air and water is the biggest problem in many developing countries, especially caused by those sectors. In
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essay, I intend to explore some possible solutions to prevent
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issue. Chief among the solutions to
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problem is gaining awareness about the environment to people, mainly the owner of
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and
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.
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is because the development of
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and
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are not accompanied by its realization of the impact on the surrounding environment.
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, the government should educate the public and owner those industries through seminars and counselling and
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give
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to industrial and
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waste. In order to create a big impact, we should make a sustainable movement
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is disseminated to the public. While the owners of those businesses are starting to prevent these issues, we must contribute with real action.
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contribution might be in the form of sustainability programs –
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reforestation involving the government and with the local community and create the anti-plastic movement.
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but not least, tightening the policy about
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waste management and gas emissions produced
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construction
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the construction
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sectors
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is a must. The policy leads to
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the improvement
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of our built environment as well as mitigate the imminent threat of climate change. A green buildings policy is one of the examples for the Architecture, Engineering, and
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industry
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. In summary,
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problem is unlikely to be resolved in the short term, especially for the areas already affected.
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, I am convinced
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solution at least would reduce the decreasing quality of air and water in the future.
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