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In the future, more people choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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in the course of time and with changing items of lives, people prefer to spend vacations in their own country
instead
 to
travel
 abroad, so domestic trips have become more popular than foreign ones. I agree with the opinion, and in
this
 essay, I will support my view with examples.
First
 of all, the main issue is money which
it
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apply
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is an essential factor for the journey. Foreign
travel
 costs more than a domestic trip, so you have to spend more cash on an abroad trip
although
 you can spend half the fee in your county on holiday.
For example
, in Iran cost of foreign
travel
 is at least three or four times of
a domestic
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domestic travel
a domestic journey
a domestic trip
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travel
.
Next
 point, In some countries there are many tourist attractions. When your home Country has many places for a holiday, you no longer need to foreign tour and you prefer to spend the holiday in your habitat .
for
Instance
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, my cousin lives in Turkey ,one of the touristic
countires
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countries
, and every year he
travel
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travels
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 to see turkey's tourist attraction places. In conclusion, to reduce the low cost of trips and have many places to spend holidays, the person prefers to
travel
 more in their country , but some people have enough money; unfortunately, they do not have resorts to spend their vacation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • domestic tourism
  • international travel
  • cultural exchange
  • national pride
  • affordability
  • convenience
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • local businesses
  • comfort zone
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