Science will soon make it possible for people to live until 100 years, perhaps even to 200 years. Some people think that this would be a good thing. Others think that it would cause many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Achievements we
able
to achieve in Add a missing verb
are able
the
science and technology are remarkable. It has been predicted the way we are getting along its not far away when every Correct article usage
apply
person
will able to live more than 200 years
, this
thinking relish some people but some contradicts
that it would create Change the verb form
contradict
number
of problems. Change the article
a number
the number
This
essay will discuss both perspective
and I will give my opinion as well in the forthcoming paragraphs.
According to Change to a plural noun
perspectives
first
notion, if it made possible to live more than two hundred Change the article
the first
years
that would be a markable accomplishment because if it made certain that a human can live around 200 years
than
every Correct your spelling
then
person
will be able to plan his life
better as there will be enough time to do every thing
Correct your spelling
everything
such
as marriage, kids, study and soon. Moreover
, a disease free
Add a hyphen
disease-free
life
, for example
, as the person
will able to long
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a long
life
it can only happen if an antibiotic of every disease is found, which makes almost quarter of humans life
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bedridden
bed ridden
.
According to Correct your spelling
bedridden
second
statement, having Change the article
the second
such
a long life
span will cause lot
of problems Change the article
a lot
such
as Correct your spelling
overpopulation
over population
, pollution, deforestation etcetera. Correct your spelling
overpopulation
Firstly
, with
having Change preposition
apply
large
number of Change the article
a large
the large
years
to live for a person
, will make a world tidy
place to live as Correct article usage
a tidy
birth
rate will be Add an article
the birth
same
. Correct article usage
the same
Secondly
, to adjust more populace demand for land will rise which can become the reason for deforestation, which eventually make a populated world. For example
, it has been researched that countries with large populace have most
populated air.
To sum up, Correct article usage
the most
although
the feeling to live Add a hyphen
disease-free
disease
free Correct article usage
a disease
life
for such
a long period relish people but
that can be the reason for the destruction of our ecosystem. Remove the conjunction
apply
Furthermore
, if our environment got vanished there will be no place to survive. I am with the later
statement.Correct your spelling
latter
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