Science will soon make it possible for people to live until 100 years, perhaps even to 200 years. Some people think that this would be a good thing. Others think that it would cause many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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science and technology are remarkable. It has been predicted the way we are getting along its not far away when every
person
will able to live more than 200
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,
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that it would create
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of problems.
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and I will give my opinion as well in the forthcoming paragraphs. According to
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notion, if it made possible to live more than two hundred
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that would be a markable accomplishment because if it made certain that a human can live around 200
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every
person
will be able to plan his
life
better as there will be enough time to do
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such
as marriage, kids, study and soon.
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life
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life
it can only happen if an antibiotic of every disease is found, which makes almost quarter of humans
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. According to
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statement, having
such
a long
life
span will cause
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of problems
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as
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overpopulation
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over population
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overpopulation
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, pollution, deforestation etcetera.
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having
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number of
years
to live for a
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place to live as
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rate will be
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, to adjust more populace demand for land will rise which can become the reason for deforestation, which eventually make a populated world.
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populated air. To sum up,
although
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free
life
for
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a long period relish people
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that can be the reason for the destruction of our ecosystem.
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, if our environment got vanished there will be no place to survive. I am with the
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statement.
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