Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?
In modern
society
, the field
of education changed a lot in which many students likes to go outside of their country for further
learning. In this
essay,I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of this
statement.
Moreover
,International experience enhance students ability to overcome difficulties related to learning and these norms give them better job opportunity in other countries
. For example
, majority
of young engineers in India now migrating to other Correct article usage
the majority
countries
like USA
Canada and Australia.Correct article usage
the USA
In addition
, global trends like this
helps
to impart economic sufficiency and more human resources internationally. Apparently, more international professionals Change the verb form
help
means
more flow of foreign money in their Change the verb form
mean
society
.In addition
, to
Change preposition
apply
this
money exchange helps new infrastructure facilities and constructive policies in the field
of banking
system. Add an article
the banking
Although
,if the people
get better jobs this
will definitely increase their standard of life
and in which Replace the word
living
people
purchase more products and goods from their society
However
, it brings Add the comma(s)
,However
a
positive trends of consumerism in their Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
society
.
Admittedly, migration
of talented students Correct article usage
the migration
results
lack of creative employees and Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
less
industrial professionals in developing Correct quantifier usage
fewer
countries
. Reportedly, the field
of science and research only concentrated in rich countries
because most of the scientist are belongs to these countries
which adversely affect the growth of poor countries
. Consequently
, Add an article
the lake
a lake
lake
of talented Correct your spelling
lack
people
brings negative impact
especially in the Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
field
of education. For example
, In China, now
government provides extra payment for university professors because Correct article usage
the now
last
5 years 55% Chinese
educationists migrated to Change preposition
of Chinese
USA
for continuing their research work. So government give them scholarship and financial aid for their studies in order to mitigate their migration.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the USA
people
's way of learning is changed, now everyone consider
more money rather than their social responsibility. So government should ensure better payment and facilities for their own talented Change the verb form
considers
people
otherwise
they will definitely Replace the word
lose
loose
themCorrect your spelling
lose
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