Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

In modern
society
, the
field
of education changed a lot in which many students likes to go outside of their country for
further
learning. In
this
essay,I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of
this
statement.
Moreover
,International experience enhance students ability to overcome difficulties related to learning and these norms give them better job opportunity in other
countries
.
For example
,
majority
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of young engineers in India now migrating to other
countries
like
USA
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the USA
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Canada and Australia.
In addition
, global trends like
this
helps
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help
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to impart economic sufficiency and more human resources internationally. Apparently, more international professionals
means
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mean
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more flow of foreign money in their
society
.
In addition
,
to
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this
money exchange helps new infrastructure facilities and constructive policies in the
field
of
banking
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the banking
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system.
Although
,if the
people
get better jobs
this
will definitely increase their standard of
life
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living
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and in which
people
purchase more products and goods from their
society
However
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,However
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, it brings
a
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apply
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positive trends of consumerism in their
society
. Admittedly,
migration
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the migration
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of talented students
results
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inresults
fromresults
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lack of creative employees and
less
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fewer
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industrial professionals in developing
countries
. Reportedly, the
field
of science and research only concentrated in rich
countries
because most of the scientist are belongs to these
countries
which adversely affect the growth of poor
countries
.
Consequently
,
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the lake
a lake
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lake
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lack
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of talented
people
brings negative
impact
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impacts
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especially in the
field
of education.
For example
, In China,
now
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the now
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government provides extra payment for university professors because
last
5 years 55%
Chinese
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of Chinese
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educationists migrated to
USA
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the USA
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for continuing their research work. So government give them scholarship and financial aid for their studies in order to mitigate their migration. In conclusion,
people
's way of learning is changed, now everyone
consider
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considers
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more money rather than their social responsibility. So government should ensure better payment and facilities for their own talented
people
otherwise
they will definitely
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lose
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loose
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lose
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them
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