It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is often believed that that the advancement in technology will contribute to decreasing the

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of traditional

culture

, which lead to increasing the difficulty to make them compatible. In my point of view, I would completely agree with

this

statement because

this

development

have

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weakened peoples' faith and beliefs about the importance of protecting their

culture

from being lost. Some would argue that technology

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significantly contributed

in

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promoting the importance of following the traditional habits in each society across different generations.

This

is advancement has made it possible for

people

to preserve their national heritage and identity through using the latest techniques and tools, which have wide applications in solidifying the

culture

's roots in peoples' hearts and minds. Social media platforms, where

people

can share posts about their cultural stories and habits with their followers, are one the examples of using computerized data in raising the sense of the cultural

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.

As a result

, it would effectively connect

people

to their roots as well as foster their sense of patriotism.

On the other hand

, I think that technological development

have

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turn

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the world more globalized by creating a global and unified

culture

. It stimulates humans to comply with the trends and beliefs that are utterly different from their cultural beliefs so that they can become part of the global cult.

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, the

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of social media platforms and mobile applications have pushed their users away from wearing their traditional customs as well as speaking their local language.

This

trend has resulted in cultivating the idea that

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a

culture

would consider as a sign of

backward

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and ignorance. To sum up, I would

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that technology and

culture

are going in opposite directions because

the

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technological development has a dominant impact in inducing

people

toward relinquishing their local traditions and complying with

global

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the global

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culture

that

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have created for them.