It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is often believed that that the advancement in technology will contribute to decreasing the
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of traditional
culture
, which lead to increasing the difficulty to make them compatible. In my point of view, I would completely agree with
this
statement because
this
development
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weakened peoples' faith and beliefs about the importance of protecting their
culture
from being lost. Some would argue that technology
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significantly contributed
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promoting the importance of following the traditional habits in each society across different generations.
This
is advancement has made it possible for
people
to preserve their national heritage and identity through using the latest techniques and tools, which have wide applications in solidifying the
culture
's roots in peoples' hearts and minds. Social media platforms, where
people
can share posts about their cultural stories and habits with their followers, are one the examples of using computerized data in raising the sense of the cultural
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.
As a result
, it would effectively connect
people
to their roots as well as foster their sense of patriotism.
On the other hand
, I think that technological development
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turn
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the world more globalized by creating a global and unified
culture
. It stimulates humans to comply with the trends and beliefs that are utterly different from their cultural beliefs so that they can become part of the global cult.
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, the
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of social media platforms and mobile applications have pushed their users away from wearing their traditional customs as well as speaking their local language.
This
trend has resulted in cultivating the idea that
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a
culture
would consider as a sign of
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and ignorance. To sum up, I would
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that technology and
culture
are going in opposite directions because
the
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technological development has a dominant impact in inducing
people
toward relinquishing their local traditions and complying with
global
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culture
that
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have created for them.
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