In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In a large number of countries the world over, traditional foodstuffs are losing priority down to the availability of continental

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, there has been a growing body of opinion that

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phenomenon has detrimental effects on both families and societies. Being a rational mind, I, too, assent to

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notion, for I am of the view that

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tendency would create distance among family members, and societies would surely lose uniqueness in culinary skill and customs. Among the ratiocination to buttress my stance, the one that deals with the downside of having international fast foods as a reason

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creating distance from youngsters to elderly people because of having different

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preferences.

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, older people used to

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conventional foods cannot change their eating

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when adolescents bring fast

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their dining tables, causing many arguments and creating a gap between

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generations. To exemplify, an empirical study conducted by Oxford University reveals that 95% of juveniles do not like to go out

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with their guardians because of dissimilarities in

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choices among them.

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, a gradual increase in the consumption of junk

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has negative repercussions on family lives. Another critical rationale in reference to why the replacement of traditional

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international

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has negative impacts on a community is necessarily synonymous with

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some

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indifferent

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and cooking

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. To be more precise, if fast

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were not being introduced and replaced, people would continue to follow their conventional cooking style and

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habits, resulting in protecting their customs and norms. To cite an example, Singapore

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lost its ancient

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culture many years ago because of the consumption of international snacks in

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large

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, continental foodstuffs surely have many negative impacts on society. In conclusion, the increasing consumption of junk

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instead

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of traditional meals negatively affects personal life and society.