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Some people believe charity organization should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both opinions and tell which side do you agree?

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Many individuals believe that
charities
 should assist
to
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the citizens of their own nation rather than
whole
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 country. Some believe that these
charities
 organisations should help all over
btge
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the
 world where
people
 need. I believe
charities
 should help
people
 wherever
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they
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the
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they
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live
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 and need help.
This
 essay will discuss both
the
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views in the forthcoming paragraphs and
also
 elaborate
my
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 views.
To begin
 with,
the
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non-profit organisations help solely. They get funds from
the
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rich
people
.
For instance
, In 2020, In the covid19
pandemic
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 many migrants lost their jobs due to lockdown and they did not have food to eat and
place
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 to live.
Charities
 came forward to help those migrants.
For example
,
Sonu
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the Sonu
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 Sood foundation came forward to help
people
 all over the world.
This
 organisation arranged
bus
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a bus
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 to drop the migrants in their
hometown
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hometowns
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.
Moreover
, many nations came forward to help each other during
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a pandemic
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pandemic
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pandemics
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.
For instance
, countries like Canada,
USA
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the USA
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, Russia came forward to help India during covid19 wave 2nd. These countries helped by providing PPE kits, masks, vaccination.
People
 should help all over the world for the sake of humanity. To conclude, in my opinion, one should
came
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 forward to help at
international
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the international
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 level. An individual can help and support victims
by
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financially, mentally and emotionally.
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