Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantes of being slef-employed?

Nowadays with the increase in the IT sector throughout the globe, it has resulted in
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vast number of job opportunities.
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number of jobs are available for all the people, still some people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a firm.
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number of disadvantages.
Firstly
, in view of being self-employed, many citizens set up their own firms namely
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startups. At
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time goes, they will understand the negatives behind it.
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support from the other enterprises. No organization can run the company without getting
projects
. In order to get the
projects
, they need to stand in front of the big IT companies and wait for their turn to explain their idea and
also
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of
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employment in the later stages.
Secondly
, employees will not develop certain skills, if they are self-employed.
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, one who works in a company will learn to develop obeying skills i.e., to obey the rules from the superior.
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it will help in developing leadership skills, as well as nurturing our resistance levels. Being self-employed, we always look for the
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proficient in. In one point of
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it may be advantageous, but on the other side of the coin, it will limit our knowledge to
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category itself.
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to conclude, people should come out of the belief of self-employment and need to understand that it is their presence of mind and the willingness to work in any environment, which will help them to succeed in their life.
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