Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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that our

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friends

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should have the same direction of thinking with us,

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some people have an

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argument

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. Personally, I hold the view that it is better to have different ideas among

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group of

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.

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essay will

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both sides of

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controvosial

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controversial

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clealy

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clearly

, along with my own

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opinion

. Many

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cite various benefits of having

friends

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who always have the same thought. The

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obvious one is probably the convenience in living together, meaning that they could accompany

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,wherever they go or whatever they do, all the time because their preferences are identical. Another advantage is less possibility of disputation. As they usually support each other in every aspect, their relationship could be

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long

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for ever

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.  

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it might have some upsides of

same

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oppinion

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opinion

, I am mainly of the view that in the same group of

friends

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, different thinking is very essential. Perhaps the

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and foremost utility may be the opportunity to have

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. When members in the group raise the dominance of their idea and

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listen to the

other's

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,

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stage would suddenly happen, possibly resulting in the most effective decision making

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. Not only

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,

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but

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this

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type of

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friends

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friend

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would be able to protect us from harmfulness.

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is due to they usually admonishing us if our behaviour

seem

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to be dangerous,

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example

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good roommates may complain

their

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to their

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buddies when hang out and come back to

room

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late at night. In conclusion, It may

true

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that

friends

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whose ideas never contradict with us will be beneficial,

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, I strongly

beleive

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believe

that

friends

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who sometimes

disagee

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disagree

with us are more worth having. Were each friend to argue and respect other's ideas at the same time,their

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friendship

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friend ship

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friendship

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would be sustainable.