Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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that our
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friends
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some people have an
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against
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. Personally, I hold the view that it is better to have different ideas among
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group of
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both sides of
this
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controversial
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, along with my own
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opinion
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cite various benefits of having
friends
who always have the same thought. The
first
obvious one is probably the convenience in living together, meaning that they could accompany
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,wherever they go or whatever they do, all the time because their preferences are identical. Another advantage is less possibility of disputation. As they usually support each other in every aspect, their relationship could be
last
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.  
Although
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oppinion
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opinion
, I am mainly of the view that in the same group of
friends
, different thinking is very essential. Perhaps the
first
and foremost utility may be the opportunity to have
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. When members in the group raise the dominance of their idea and
also
listen to the
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,
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stage would suddenly happen, possibly resulting in the most effective decision making
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. Not only
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but
also
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would be able to protect us from harmfulness.
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to be dangerous,
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good roommates may complain
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buddies when hang out and come back to
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late at night. In conclusion, It may
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that
friends
whose ideas never contradict with us will be beneficial,
nevertheless
, I strongly
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believe
that
friends
who sometimes
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disagree
with us are more worth having. Were each friend to argue and respect other's ideas at the same time,their
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friend ship
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would be sustainable.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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