Some believe that it is good for a country’s culture to import films and TV programmes, while others think it is better for a country to have their own films and TV programmes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that
telecasing
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telecasting
international
media
shows
has
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cultural benefits for a
nation
while
other
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contradicts and believe in showcasing only native content is advantageous for a
nation
.
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essay will talk about both sides followed by a logical view. On one side, providing entertainment
contents
of other countries can certainly
broadern
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broaden
broader
the mindset of individuals and evolve the existing
culture
.
This
is because by the exposure of international multimedia a thorough knowledge of their overall mentality is experienced by viewers which creates a sense of comparability between the international and home
culture
.
As a result
, native people attempt to
eleminate
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eliminate
all the flaws which exist in the
culture
of their home country by adapting the way of life experienced by them via TV programs
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abroad.
For instance
, girls in India are given more liberty than ever before in which the western
media
plays a vital role which reflected how girls are self-capable in their
nation
.
On the other hand
, some potential disadvantages are
also
associated
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delivering movies and series of other places which is why the other set of
individual
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belive
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in only showcasing the local
media
content.
This
is because the intervention of international cultural standards
sometime
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influence the existing native
culture
destructively whereas local
contents
are always created while keeping the content within the national standards and limits.
For instance
, by exposing to myriad international series on Netflix and Amazon Prime, the youth of our
nation
have
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offending
spritualism
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spiritualism
and
pretent
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pretend
present
to be more practical in life which certainly violates cultural regulations whereas the
expsoure
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exposure
of native
contents
such
as classical singing on national channel
inclucates
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inculcates
a sense of respect and understanding of our own
culture
. Conclusively,
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importing entertainment material from other countries to telecast can develop the existing cultural shortcomings, it
also
develops a sense of offensiveness to our own tradition which is often avoided in native
media
contents
. In my opinion, despite few potential consequences of playing international programs in
home
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country, its myriad benefits cannot be denied which can certainly revolutionize the existing
culture
of the
nation
.
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