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we live in a world of technology these days. While the Internet brings it with clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary
world
, technology is in the spotlight and could allow the
Internet
 to bring undeniably numerous benefits to
people
.
Nonetheless
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 some issues regarding the control and safeness of
information
outweighs
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 the positive development. In my opinion, I totally disagree, and
this
 essay will discuss some arguments that support my view.
To begin
 with, the
Internet
 is a milestone in the
world
 the main reason why I believe
that is
 because it has changed completely the way
people
 live today. The virtual
world
 brought about a faster pace into everyone’s life when some matters became simpler than they used to be,
such
 as how
people
 communicate, search for a job and even how they acquire knowledge.
Under
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 my perspective, the lack of security
which
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 some websites may have, or even the absence of the source of the
information
 do not minimise
people
’s usage. Another reason why positiveness outweighs the disadvantages is
because
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 the free content available online has enormously increased. Several
people
 share
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they
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 knowledge through online platforms which make
information
 runs faster amongst
people
. Once they become more frequent and common, cybersecurity needed to grow at the same level to assure that the environment is safe, and the
information
 shared is accurate.
Consequently
, with the advent of
this
 rapid growth, the way a country regulates its permits and prohibitions needed to evolve and indeed it does not mean that all problems diminish the importance of all advantages presented. In conclusion, it is clear that problems regarding cybersecurity
exists
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, because they have evolved alongside
with
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the
Internet
,
however
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 it does not make them more evident than all pros the
Internet
 brought to the
world
such
 as the rapid knowledge shared and the faster way of life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global connectivity
  • digital banking
  • cybersecurity
  • data protection
  • security breaches
  • cyber attacks
  • online transactions
  • digital divide
  • surveillance
  • freedom of information
  • responsible usage
  • ethical considerations
  • digital footprints
  • online behavior
  • information inequality
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