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many people think that the world should speak one language, others argue that countries should have its own languages. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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This
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 has been a major debatable topic around the world,
that is
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, if
everyoneone
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everyone one
everyone
 should speak
one
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language
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 or, each
country
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 should have its own
language
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. I am going to give points on both of them and
then
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 give my opinion.
Firstly
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, in the
first
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 scenario where the whole globe is functioning on basis of
one
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language
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,
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, English, It would be easy to communicate with everyone. All the folks in the community wouldn't have the
language
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 barrier and no
one
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 would need google translate.
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- if everyone spoke the same
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 around the globe there would be millions of books
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 would be published in the same
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, and there wouldn't be the need for translators to translate
one
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language
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 into another when world conferences are held.
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,
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 does have its own set of concerns to deal with.
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, in the
second
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 case where each
country
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 has its own dialect. It helps people remember their roots, cultural values, historic fights they have been through. Having their own dialect represents
a nations uniqueness
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the uniqueness of a nation
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 and how they stand out from other countries. In each and every countries there are other local dialects present which makes it very diversified and
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 of a kind.
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- If you take the
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 India it has almost 250 different dialects which are official and unofficially many more.
This
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 is what makes India stand apart on the global level. Another case in point can be if you take the
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Spanish
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, it has its own different forms
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 as Mexican
Spanish
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, Columbian
Spanish
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, Puerto-Rican
Spanish
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 so on and so on. All these different languages would lose their meaning and trace from the face of the earth if we all started speaking the same
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.
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, learning new languages can enhance our brain skills and
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helps in cerebellum development. To conclude, I reiterate, stating that each
country
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 should have its own form of dialect, as it helps us to be in touch with our roots, culture, our sacred manuscripts.
Language
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 is
one
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 of the forms of unique identity a
country
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 can have.
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