information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

The diagram illustrates some data about the
process
of preparing soft
drink
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. Overall, there are 5 stages in
this
process
, beginning
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the
water
is prepared for the drinks and culminating is with the packaging and delivery of the finished product. In the
first
stage
of the
process
, raw
water
puts through a filter before a softener and other chemicals are added to it. The
water
has been processed, it is pumped and to skip
next
to 2 stages where it undergoes heating evaporation and carbonation. During
this
stage
, the
water
is heated and (to)run through a cooling pipe before (the)carbon dioxide is added. In the
third
stage
of
this
process
, the carbonated
water
is put into a mixing tank where it is mixed with colouring, syrup, flavour and
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is filtered before being packaged into cans and bottles.
This
stage
is named filtering and filling.
Finally
, they are transported to supermarkets.
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