information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

The diagram illustrates some data about the

process

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of preparing soft

drink

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. Overall, there are 5 stages in

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process

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, beginning

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the

water

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is prepared for the drinks and culminating is with the packaging and delivery of the finished product. In the

first

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of the

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, raw

water

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puts through a filter before a softener and other chemicals are added to it. The

water

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has been processed, it is pumped and to skip

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to 2 stages where it undergoes heating evaporation and carbonation. During

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, the

water

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is heated and (to)run through a cooling pipe before (the)carbon dioxide is added. In the

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stage

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of

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, the carbonated

water

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is put into a mixing tank where it is mixed with colouring, syrup, flavour and

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result

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is filtered before being packaged into cans and bottles.

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stage

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is named filtering and filling.

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, they are transported to supermarkets.