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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?

#communication #text #instant #forms #people #death #grammar
It is true that online
communication
 is affecting the grammar and spelling of a lot of
people
. Because of the
use
 of
abbreviation
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abbreviations
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 and internet slang. As
the
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 result of
this
 proper
use
 of
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English
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english
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the english
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 language is disregarded.
Thus
, I partially agree
to
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this
 statement.
First
,
people
 can choose whether to abbreviate or
use
 the complete word when texting.
For example
, I don't
use
abbreviation
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abbreviations
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 when texting or in any form of online
communication
. Because of, it is informal especially when
your
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you're
you are
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 sending a message to your boss or you don't the person. In the
end
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 it is like writing a letter and is it formal or informal.
Second
, internet slang is common
also
 in sending
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a message
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message
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messages
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. The reason why
people
 using
this
 type of
communication
because
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 of time.
In
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As
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result
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a result
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 of
this
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this person
these people
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people
 becoming lazy.
Therefore
 using
of
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apply
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proper spelling is greatly affected. On other hand, because of
this
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these
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 reasons, I partially agree that
on
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apply
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communication
 is becoming a threat to
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English
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english
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the english
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 language. Due to I don't believe those reasons is enough. To summarize, online
communication
 is not really
threath
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threat
threaten
 to
english
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.
Its
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It's
It is
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your
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you're
you are
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 choice if you will follow or not.
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