SOME PEOPLE ARE MAKING NEW FRIENDS BY USING SOCIALIZING NETWORK WEBSITES AND INTERNET CHAT ROOMS. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THIS IS GOOD THING. OTHER PEOPLE SAY THAT PEOPLE SHOULD MAKE FRIENDS BY FACE TO FACE CHAT. DISCUSS THESE VIEWS AND GIVES YOUR OPININON

The world witnessed revolutionary inventions in terms of science and technology with social media being most prominent.
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there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that it is
right
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place to make
friends
through social
applications
while
other
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emphasizes that personal interaction is needed to make
friends
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factor
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make a section of people advocate that to make new
friends
through
social
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network
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are constructive and other people have many reasons to said
face
to
face
interaction is needed.
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and foremost is, in
this
modern era to make
friends
through social
applications
are
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new
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trend among youngsters because everyone is busy in their own schedules so it is not easy for them to meet someone personally that’s why they are
keen
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interested to make new
friends
through numerous social websites. To vindicate Facebook, Instagram,
snapcaht
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Snapchat
.
Secondly
, science and technology are welcomed warmly by
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of people because they are always online through various social modes in their professional life as well as personal life because all work nowadays
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through internet connectivity that’s why they stay online. According to
BBC
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it is revealed that 95% of youngsters are using social sites these days.
Thirdly
, some
thinks
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that
too
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to
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become good
friends
we have to start
conversation
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a conversation
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through some social site or
chat
rooms
applications
and if both of them feel comfortable according to their distinct stages and maturity level only
then
they meet personally On the other
side
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some believe that to make good
friends
we have to meet personally or
face
to
face
chat
should be there for
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reason.
Furthermore
, Is good to make
friends
through
face
to
face
chat
? Certainly yes to make
friends
through
face
to
face
chat
is a contributing factor so we better understand someone to vindicate we see his way of talking, his maturity level, his likes and dislike.
Additionally
, with
face
to
face
chat
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we reap the benefit that no one
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us as we see numerous cases in social
applications
strangers are there and start to cheat someone after
become
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friends
.
Besides
,
face
to
face
chat
is good to do to make
a
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friends
because as we have not to post anything
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social
site
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and wrong
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of our pictures is not possible In my profound opinion, we have to make
friends
with
face
to
face
chat
so that we got
good
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friend circle and misuse of any our personal information or personal photographs should not be possible and we maintain a healthy relations through
face
to
face
interactions.
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