SOME PEOPLE ARE MAKING NEW FRIENDS BY USING SOCIALIZING NETWORK WEBSITES AND INTERNET CHAT ROOMS. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THIS IS GOOD THING. OTHER PEOPLE SAY THAT PEOPLE SHOULD MAKE FRIENDS BY FACE TO FACE CHAT. DISCUSS THESE VIEWS AND GIVES YOUR OPININON
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However
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the right
friends
through social applications
while other
emphasizes that personal interaction is needed to make Correct pronoun usage
others
friends
Apparently, various factor
make a section of people advocate that to make new Fix the agreement mistake
factors
friends
through social
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the social
a social
network
are constructive and other people have many reasons to said Fix the agreement mistake
networks
face
to face
interaction is needed. First
and foremost is, in this
modern era to make friends
through social applications
are
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is are
new
trend among youngsters because everyone is busy in their own schedules so it is not easy for them to meet someone personally that’s why they are Add an article
the new
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interested to make new Change the adjective
keenly
friends
through numerous social websites. To vindicate Facebook, Instagram, snapcaht
. Correct your spelling
Snapchat
Secondly
, science and technology are welcomed warmly by chunk
of people because they are always online through various social modes in their professional life as well as personal life because all work nowadays Add an article
a chunk
the chunk
are
through internet connectivity that’s why they stay online. According to Change the verb form
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BBC
it is revealed that 95% of youngsters are using social sites these days. Add a comma
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, some thinks
that Change the verb form
think
too
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to
friends
we have to start conversation
through some social site or Add an article
a conversation
the conversation
chat
rooms applications
and if both of them feel comfortable according to their distinct stages and maturity level only then
they meet personally
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some believe that to make good Add a comma
,side
friends
we have to meet personally or face
to face
chat
should be there for myriad
reason. Add an article
a myriad
Furthermore
, Is good to make friends
through face
to face
chat
? Certainly yes to make friends
through face
to face
chat
is a contributing factor so we better understand someone to vindicate we see his way of talking, his maturity level, his likes and dislike. Additionally
, with face
to face
chat
we reap the benefit that no one Add a comma
,chat
cheat
us as we see numerous cases in social Change the verb form
cheats
applications
strangers are there and start to cheat someone after become
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becoming
friends
. Besides
, face
to face
chat
is good to do to make a
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apply
friends
because as we have not to post anything in
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on
site
and wrong Fix the agreement mistake
sites
used
of our pictures is not possible
In my profound opinion, we have to make Change the form of the verb
use
friends
with face
to face
chat
so that we got good
friend circle and misuse of any our personal information or personal photographs should not be possible and we maintain a healthy relations through Correct article usage
a good
face
to face
interactions.Submitted by skshikhakochar on
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