Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that the adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Every phase of human
life
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has cherishable memories. While most people think years as a teenager is the happiest time;
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, others consider adult
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as the one with
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responsibility
as freedom.
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I lean towards the latter part of the statement, in
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essay, I will discuss my notes on both
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views adding an example.
Firstly
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, teenagers are considered
free spirited
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people. While they do not have any strings attached, it is notable that most youngsters' are financially supported by their parents. Meanwhile, the only expectation from the teen's is to figure out their interests and works towards them whilst having fun.
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, during my teen years, I was financially dependent on my parents, they paid
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my trips, my shoppings, my essentials. I did not have as many responsibilities as I do now. Considering my age, I was granted the freedom to explore my options while having their support. It was the most
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phase of my
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.
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, I surely think most people feel the same.
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, not all parents are understanding. Teenagers are bound to rules and restrictions and are answerable for their
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.
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, adults are free to make their decisions. During
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the adulting
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stage, most humans have their
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figured out and are
comparetively
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comparatively
responsible.
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period of
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teaches everyone
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how to multiple
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and money manage. The beauty of adulting is taking initiative for self needs while celebrating age in hand.
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, if you wish to buy a car, individuals are matured enough to work towards it rather than expecting it from someone. It is more valuable when we put in our
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monies to gift ourselves.
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, self-dependency can be acquired. Though it might not be as
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environment compared to teen days, it is surely the most enjoyable period. I consider it a middle ground. In conclusion, neither teenagers nor adults can
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happy at those particular stages. Every situation has its own push-backs and dealings. Considering my personal experience and
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a few individuals of my age, I agree that
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the adult
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stage of
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is most enjoyable in
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comparison
to
younger
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the younger
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stage of
life
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for its responsible independence.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adolescence
  • responsibilities
  • milestones
  • fulfillment
  • exploration
  • identity
  • carefree
  • accomplishments
  • emotional support
  • stable relationships
  • forging friendships
  • meaningful relationships
  • personal goals
  • pressures
  • significant
  • satisfaction
  • stress
  • unique joys
  • carefree
  • deeper happiness
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