Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion..
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are encouraged
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teachers
and give them feedback which in my perception should be limited at
some extent because there are Change preposition
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there should be transparency in the Add a comma
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process
where we can validate the on going
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process
like cameras or recordings. In this
way
authorities can track their own performance and make changes rather than giving power to developing minds. Add a comma
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students
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the power
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite