In some countries around the world men and women are having children later in life. What are reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

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. Nowadays, We can find that
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in their
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different rules. they are becoming more
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higher education.
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having more knowledge let them prepare for higher study.
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from
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society by having
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education. While we can find that,
people
who are not enough educated are involving them in having a disastrous lifestyle. But educated
people
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and they devoted themself to be prepared for taking responsibilities. After having higher education
people
include themself in job and
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business
businesses
because from here they can accumulate money to support their family. The other factor that acts are living in a
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modern
society, changes in the government rules to reduce population, family incomes etc.
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, we can see some positive and negative
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for taking
children
lately. As an example, we can see that Singapur
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a developed country by
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life
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style
and having
children
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agriculture and several other sectors.
However
, when women become older their fertility will decrease and that can affect their
children
. If we say about Bangladesh, there are
people
in the rural area and they take
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age and that's creating overpopulation. In conclusion, I would suggest that we should create awareness to take
children
at the age between 25-35.
People
should have sufficient knowledge about family planning
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Thus
we can handle any negative situation in near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • developments
  • adulthood
  • education
  • career
  • financial stability
  • ready
  • start a family
  • assisted reproductive technologies
  • personal fulfillment
  • self-development
  • improved healthcare
  • life expectancies
  • cultural factors
  • religious factors
  • access
  • birth control methods
  • responsibilities
  • challenges
  • parenthood
  • influence
  • media
  • popular culture
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