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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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Coal , Oil and Gas are some of the most important natural resources that we
use
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 every day.Fossil
fuels
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 are made from decomposing plants and animals .Unfortunately, fossil
fuels
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 are a nonrenewable resource .Definitely , we have responsibility for our environment by saving
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 ,
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 as reducing lighting
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 and by choosing transportation wisely .Alternatively, we can
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 another source of
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 , solar
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 and wind
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. According to the National Academies of Sciences,81 % of the total
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 used in the United States comes from fossil
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. Now, fuel conservation is one of our biggest concerns.
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, many people have a habit of turning on lights which they do not actually need,
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 saving
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 you
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 will save on electricity bills.
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, try cycling or walking to your destination
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 of using a car , or
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 public transportation which can carry many passengers at once
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 less fuel.Natural resources are very important for us.
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 why it is necessary to take care of our natural wealth and
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 it judiciously. We can avoid the wastage of fossil
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 by switching to alternative sources i.e. solar
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 and wind
energy
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 . Windmills
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 wind
energy
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 to produce electricity . Of course , solar
energy
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 is used to heat water , cook food and generate electricity. In conclusion, environmental education plays important role in creating awareness .Through environmental education ,people come to know about their rights and duties towards nature.
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