Some people think that criminal behaviour can have genetic reasons, while others believe that only circumstances can lead some people to crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are lots of
crimes
happening around us every day. The authorities try to figure out the possible reasons for committing crimes
. Many of them believed that it contributes to the problem of genes and the others claim that it is an acquired action due to some special stories. In my opinion, the latter has a higher possibility for a person to become an offender.
Firstly
, it is commonly said that crimes
are related to the problem of genes. Criminal offences such
as sexual crimes
are related to the inborn nature of humans. Most of these offenders have Add an article
a deficiency
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deficiencies
characters
which lead to Fix the agreement mistake
character
the
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behaviour
. Moreover
, some of their acts are due to their curiosity towards sex which is classified as psychological
effect. Add an article
a psychological
Thus
, it is clear that criminal behaviour
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is attributed
the
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genetics
factors.
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On the other hand
, some people carry out anti-social behaviours because of the
their own stories, like a financial burden. They are so poor that unaffordable to take care of themselves let alone their family. Remove the article
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As a result
, they opt to become pick-pockets so as to obtain valuable items. Worse still, some of them may participate in bank robberies. As can clearly be seen from this
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behaviour
.
In conclusion, no matter the reasons for genes or special circumstances, these two elements can lead to criminal behaviour
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a certain extent. After analysing both points of view, I think the Change preposition
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crimes
are most likely due to the
environmental grounds.Correct article usage
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