Mobile phones and the Internet have made it easy to stay in contact with other people. However, as a lot of time is spent using telephones and computers, there is less face-to-face contact and direct communication. Is the growing use of communications technology a positive or a negative development for society ?

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In the 21st ,century there is a lot of new
technology
to stay in contact with other
people
, so there is less face-to-face contact and direct
communication
.
However
real-life
communication
still does not exist.     Modern
technology
is an essential part of our life.
First
of all,
communication
technology
has bought us a huge number of benefits.
People
can keep in touch with each other in spite of the distance.
Also
, the Internet helps others make friends. There are endless dating sites, which helps
people
find a soul mate or a best friend.
Furthermore
, with the Internet humanity has access to everything it wants to know. Thanks to the invention of the Internet
people
can absorb any information like different perspectives or new interesting ideas.   
Nevertheless
, social media users are subject to loss of personal information which leads to bad consequences.
Moreover
long-term of the phone without interruption develops visual impairment. The use of communications
technology
is a negative development for society in that it tends to breed laziness which will probably bring major problems.    To sum up, I can say that there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages to
this
issue. Anyway, before using
communication
technology
person must learn to keep track of the time while he uses the phone and does not forget about real
communication
.
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