Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.

A number of the general public think that

sport

has gained popularity in society .

however

, others believe that

sport

is just a

leisure

activity

. In my perspective , both views have credibility which I will elaborate on in

this

essay .

First

of all , it is an undeniable fact that there is some reason why

sports

is essential to

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society .One of the reasons is that

people

can be healthier than ever before , by playing

sports

frequently ,

people

can release toxic elements from off their body in order to help the

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government

to save money which is allocated for health insurance's residents .

for example

, the number of obesity and heart attack , today , has decreased significantly throughout the

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because of

sports

in implementation . Another reason is that young generations are able to cultivate a good habit .with rapid advancement of technology ,

the

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tend to do sedentary activities

such

as playing computer games and

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chatting

through social media as well , If parents encourage their children to do

sport

insteadof

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instead of

playing games at home , children can

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their social interaction with peers .

However

, there are

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opposing

arguments saying that

sport

is nothing more than

leisure

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activity

.It is

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true

that

sport

can be counted as a

leisure

activity

because not

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has the abilities and potentials to become professional

sports

players

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,

Therefore

,

people

generally consider it as a simple

activity

for relaxing their mind and body during holidays. Apart from

this

, many families see

sport

as the way to strengthen the sense of belonging to the relatives especially for children because parents' time is spent more to do job tasks and put less care on them . All things considered ,

although

some

people

believe that

sports

are merely some

leisure

activities ,

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still think that

sport

plays an important role in

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society because it has brought advantages to

people

in terms of health and social areas .