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People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#people #english #jobs #access
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 the topic before deducing a reasonable conclusion. There are some people who opine that
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life easy for the students to
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 risk of disease, but online
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 . The online
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 topic.
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people
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 are easier to understand and apply. It
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 them away from unwanted subject matters. The printed material gave parents , an opportunity to keep
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 on children's studies. According to a
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 it showed that 70% IQ level was found in students who studies offline through printed matter
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opinion
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 to me
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • literate in English
  • global job opportunities
  • multinational companies
  • working language
  • educational opportunities
  • higher qualifications
  • job prospects
  • industries
  • technology, finance, healthcare
  • key skill
  • higher-paying jobs
  • proficiency
  • standard of living
  • facilitate immigration
  • remote working opportunities
  • income stability
  • non-English-speaking countries
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