Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job. Others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Studying at college to receive a license is believed to be the easiest path to find a job, approved by many. An alternative can be approaching

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immediately after high school to be more exposed to the career

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. In the following, I will scrutinize both ways and specify my point of view. In

the

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recent years, most

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the

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teenagers have been guided to continue their studies at university as a prominent key to

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a decent job. Industry indeed needs literate graduates for its wheels to be moving forward properly.

For instance

, engineering fields would not improve, if talented youngsters did not learn many lessons in

this

field.

In addition

, scientists who are responsible for research and development would not be capable of enhancing any factory if they were not been trained at a proper level.

On the other hand

are the advocates of jumping straight away to the working environment, as they insist on the precious value of experience

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to academic knowledge.

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idea, specifically

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gotten its believers as the number of graduates and postgraduate people who are

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around to find a proper job has been increasing drastically. To elaborate more, they assume graduation that had been the motive to achieve a fine occupation, has been the reason

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unemployment unexpectedly. To illustrate

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, we can imagine graduates of

university

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who are not willing to work in the handful

jobs

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of jobs

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. In conclusion, I do think that every society needs many knowledgeable experts, people who are able to extend the borders of technology.

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, not every young person find their best option in

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area. We should accept that studying is not the best choice for the students who have talent in operational activities,

for instance

.