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Technology generates language translation software's which leads decrease in importance of learning more different languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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There are some
people
 who hold the opinion that the advent of advanced translators
as a result
 of technology declines the necessity of learning foreign languages.
This
 is a belief that can be strongly supported as will be discussed below. A major reason why humans prefer to take advantage of qualified translation instruments is because of their potential function.
That is
 to say, technology provides instant translators which make fewer mistakes than humans in translation.
Furthermore
, they translate impartially which might discriminate them with other instruments.
For instance
,
last
 year I hired a Chinese translator to not only cooperate with me in a business meeting but
also
 help me winning an auction.
However
, later I came to know that he was oriented toward other Chinese teams and caused my failure in the competition. There is
also
 communication benefits in using a developed translator.
In other words
, as well as they enable
people
 to make
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 with individuals from various cultures, they will
also
 bring
people
 closer. As a consequence of using
such
 appliances there is no doubt that
although
 learning a new
language
 take years, translators eradicate the communication troubles.
This
 is illustrated by a voice-to-voice translator which takes the spoken word in one
language
 and
then
 vocalizes it in another dialect.
Consequently
, misunderstanding and cultural differences will be faded gradually. Some
people
,
however
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 argue that
such
 instruments don’t have an influence on learning another
language
 since they are just accelerators in becoming fluent in a foreign
language
 due to the fact that they are not accessible on all the occasions and if the internet crashes in one region,
people
 will need
language
 skills to communicate. To sum up, despite some barriers in using translation applications, they are functional and increase the interactions among
people
 from different cultures.
Therefore
, many humans would rather use them
instead
 of studying a new
language
.
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  • cultural nuances
  • linguistic subtleties
  • miscommunication
  • international diplomacy
  • cognitive development
  • educational settings
  • personal enrichment
  • multilingualism
  • job prospects
  • global business
  • technological dependence
  • data security
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  • human interaction
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