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Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this ca have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays, people love to watch
movies
 of different countries for the entertainment
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purpose
, but some populace reckons it can be advantageous too,
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 others
belief
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believe
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foeign
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foreign
movies
 puts adverse influence on the local
culture
.
This
 essay will explain both perspectives and I will
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discuss
 my point of view as well in
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 paragraphs. On the one side, foreign
movies
 can prove really helpful in learning the foreign language,
culture
, behaviour etcetera.
For instance
, a student who want to pursue studies
in
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abroad for them learning the foreign language,
culture
 are the most imperatives things in which these films can aid them to hone their skill and knowledge. On the flip side, these days children
learns
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 quickly if they will watch the
foeign
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foreign
 films they will make some role models, who could be from
differnt
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different
 religion and will have their own beliefs and if the youngs started to like those values they will start to follow them that eventually will affect their own
culture
.
For example
, one study shows in
india
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 more than 60
percent
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youth
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 follows
the
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western
culture
instead
 of their own
culture
. To conclude, In my opinion, watching western
movies
 has proved more beneficial than being
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 to our youth. It depends upon the teachings whether a
peron
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person
 follow bad or good values from these pictures.
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