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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations . However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is evident that improvements in certain factors
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 as health, education and trade are crucial for the development of impoverished
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.Some folks claim that the authorities of wealthier
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 should take more responsibility for aiding
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countries
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 in the aforesaid areas.I advocate
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 opinion to some extent.
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 and foremost, well-to-do
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 are far ahead of penurious
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 in terms of technology,education,health system and suchlike.
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, governments of richer
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 ought to provide impecunious lands with some advanced schemes in certain areas since sharing is caring and they can show sympathy and humanity by doing so.
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, increasing the scholarship programs for students in
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 would be an
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 favour for them.On top of that,campaigns for
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 industry would enhance the business knowledge of citizens and indigent
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 can somehow get out of poverty.
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prosperous
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 have their own problems, they should not put blind eyes on the
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 which are suffering from serious issues
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 as dearth.
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,necessitous
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 undoubtedly should endeavour their best to make some virtual developments.They should implement long term plans for health,education,trade and other factors.
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,Japan was severely damaged by nuclear bombs in 1945.
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, they strived tremendously to recover and today, Japan has become one of the most industrialized
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 across the globe. Even though it is true that poor
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 might be subsidized by some international philanthropic organizations,
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solely
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reliance
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 on it will have
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 impact in the long run. In a nutshell,I vehemently deem that authorities of affluent
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 should support needy counties not only financially but
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 with advanced technology in certain fields.Only
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,
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 world
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 would be able to promote themselves at a more rapid rate and a number of serious problems will be halted drastically.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underdeveloped nations
  • economic disparity
  • global cooperation
  • moral obligation
  • historical exploitation
  • interconnected world
  • economic stability
  • quality of life
  • trade relationships
  • humanitarian aid
  • capacity building
  • dependency syndrome
  • sustainable development
  • bilateral agreements
  • economic priorities
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