In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

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A
society
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is made up of both men and women and
schools
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act as building blocks of any civilised
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. Often what we learn at school consciously or subconsciously goes with us a long way . In many countries , parents have the choice to send their kids to
same-
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sexsex
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sex sex
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or co-educational
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.I totally agree that children going to single-
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sex sex
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have disadvantages later in life. Analysing the behaviour patterns and awkwardness developed towards other
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due to
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in
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schools
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and the
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bias
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imbibed by not maintaining a balanced
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will help advocate
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.
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, students who spend most of their time with the same
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might develop awkward behaviour when interacting with the other
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.
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, it's not a hidden fact that most of the meaningful friendships are formed during school time
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kids in
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sexsex
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sex sex
schools
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tend to share their thoughts and feelings only with one
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, over
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time it becomes difficult for them to open up with the other
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.
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,
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sexsex
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sex sex
schools
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create a communication barrier and behavioural eccentricity in them.
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, since
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kids become more accustomed to one
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and tend to align and share their thoughts with only them
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a feeling of
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bias
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arises in them.
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, it might be difficult for females in all-girls
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to accept that males have the same spectrum of emotions as them and
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tend to refrain themselves from indulging with other
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.
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for boys, it might be a complex thought that girls can
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be physically as strong as guys
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a sense of
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might develop .
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,
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same-
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the same-sexsex
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sexsex
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sex sex
school
also
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adds the disadvantage of a
gender
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bias
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in
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. In the nutshell , same-
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gender gender
schools
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have many disadvantages and it is correct to say that these disadvantages are added later in a child's life when they have to face the real world. The world needs a balanced and perfect amalgamation of experiences and perspectives of both the
sex
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.
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this
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should be introduced early in a student's life through co-educational
schools
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • social interaction
  • real-world preparation
  • gender stereotypes
  • academic performance
  • healthy competition
  • personal and professional settings
  • reinforce
  • collaborate
  • representative environment
  • promote gender equality
  • break down stereotypes
  • social pressures
  • academic concentration
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