Some people prefer shopping in shopping centers while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?

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There is a section of society who enjoys shopping in
local
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the local

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market
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however
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others do at shopping
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centers
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. The advantages of buying at
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the local
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market
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exploration
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an exploration
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and boosting local
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economy

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and in case of
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a shopping

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center
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is
hassle free
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with multi outlets availability. I prefer shopping
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centers
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centres

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. The shopping experience at local markets
give
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gives

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opportunity
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for exploration.As people can visit various stores and check out the products available and compare different features. The other reason is people boost their local GDP by purchasing objects from local vendors .
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is well illustrated by Surat, that the textile city turned out to be one of the highest
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in the country , having majority
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local store owners as its
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. At shopping
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, it is far more convenient as all the products are available under one roof ,so it saves
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of time. The other reason is there are many outlets available so
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apply

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if someone wants to return or exchange they didn't
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go to particular shop
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make a visit to the nearest
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available. A recent study showed that the footfall at shopping
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has increased by 38% as in busy life people want
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shopping experience. I prefer shopping
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of options
available
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for selection at one place. It is
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convenient

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and
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free. To encapsulate, the foregoing discussions propounded the view that both
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have their own opinion based on their experiences but my viewpoint has shown significance to me.

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