Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.is this a good way to raise children? what consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
As everyone
know
that Change the verb form
knows
children
's are just like a
tender birds who need full care love and affection by Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
consedring
to Correct your spelling
considering
consenting
this
, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
parents
are there who give freedom to their children
beyond the limit and fulfil their each and every demand.In my Correct your spelling
perspective
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,prospective
prospective
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perspective
this
is not superior
way to uplift their child as Add an article
a superior
children
are vulnerable and this
intitutive
create Correct your spelling
initiative
noxious
impact on their future.
To commence with the outcomes of permissive Add an article
a noxious
parents
. First
and foremost, if parents
allow their children
to do anything which they want and gave them everything which they demand for
, Remove the preposition
apply
thus
their children
lag behind into know
the value of that thing and money. Change the verb form
knowing
Furthermore
, juveniles are less experineced
as compare to their Correct your spelling
experienced
parents
,thus
some times
they Correct your spelling
sometimes
take
impulsive decisions without Correct your spelling
make
know
the pros and cones of that step which they take and Change the form of the verb
knowing
this
is the main reason that why in this
day and age most of the younger generation go astray from their right path and ruin their future. As per a survey of punjabi
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Punjabi
tribune
it is recorded that 60% Add a comma
,tribune
children
become addicted towards drugs and live seprate
from their Correct your spelling
separate
parents
and the main reason behind this
situation is that, substantial
proportion of Add an article
a substantial
parents
are workaholic nowadays and they spend less time with their children
and fulfil their every desire without teach
them about moral values which Change the verb form
teaching
is
quintessential for their mental growth.
Apart from Change the verb form
are
this
some people believe that if they leave their Add a comma
,this
children
to take their decision by themselves and gave them everything which they want ,then
their child become
more independent and they do not suffer Change the verb form
becomes
with
burden at Change the preposition
from
very
young age. Add an article
a very
In addition
, in Japan
most of the Add a comma
,Japan
children
have smart gadgets from their younger age and their parents
belive
that it become Correct your spelling
believe
fruitbearing
for them ton fill their treasure trove of knowledge and they Correct your spelling
fruit-bearing
fruit bearing
rubb
the shoulder with others.
In conclusion, it is not right to raise kids giving and allowing them Correct your spelling
rub
rubbed
evrything
, Correct your spelling
everything
however
the better way is encouraging and giving them Add a comma
,however
oppertunities
to achieve their purposes and Correct your spelling
opportunities
then
they will become more elated and succesfull
in their futureCorrect your spelling
successful
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