Some people believe that women should be able to join their country's army and police forces, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion, including examples from your knowledge and experience.

Women

's are the greatest blessing from God and they are capable of doing all sorts of suitable employment if they wish and will but working or taking the responsibility of

army

or

police

department

job is a challenging task in our society. Most of the individuals prefer the

women

to join in the

police

and

army

career line while another side of members

is quite disagree

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with

this

including me. In

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i

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will explain both sides of perspectives with strong examples.

Firstly

, they are a lot of advantages for the

women

who join in

army

department

.

Women

can be the role model to the society female group and they can prove that

women

are as strong as men and can handle every job with responsibility.

For example

, one of my friend aunts is a deputy commissioner in the

police

department

and she is passionate about her

work

by holding alternative responsibilities she will be doing her

work

actively and ready to catch junkies very bravely .

Thus

, it makes our female gender so energetic and sees the dream to serve our country honestly by watching these powerful confident ladies. Whereas, critics claim that

women

are not suitable for the responsible

army

police

forces job. They think that

women

are so weak in

this

matter and hold the conception that males are the best to

work

in

police

forces.

For instance

, individuals tend to state that

women

who join the

army

are not responsible for their personal life and household preference is lacking. Children are missing mother love, the spouse cannot have a

comfort

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married life as

women

always away from home and in terms of

health

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women

are sensitive so they will be ill if they do

army

kind of jobs because in these the training tough and hard as females body parts so fragile. So,

women

if they

work

in the

police

department

also

face these sorts of drawbacks. To conclude, everything in life which we think is important will consist of pros and cons and in

this

matter cons outweigh its pros.

Therefore

,

women

should take the responsibilities of their children and home as well as their partner whereas

army

police

jobs are not capable for them I believe.