More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?
As time has changed, there are a number of updations are
also
evolved in the styles of dresses
. Nowadays, more individuals are trying to wear modern dresses
. However
, this
change
in Trends has made both
good and bad development in society. This
essay explains both
these effects and conclude
with an appropriate view.
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concludes
Firstly
, the main negative effect of the arrival of fashionable dresses
is
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is changing
change
in cultures. This
is because the dressing styles of each society has been followed on the basis of their traditions and hereditaries. They are classifying on the basis of these dresses
. Wearing modern dresses
will change
these characteristics of
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apply
them
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For example
, Traditional dresses
of ladies of Rajasthan are sarees and variety
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various
types
of bangles and necklaces. But new generation ladies are now wearing fashionable Change preposition
of types
dresses
and it is difficult to recognise them from the other community.
On the other hand
, it is necessary to change
with the development of world
. Add an article
the world
Otherwise
the things will be outdated. Add a comma
,Otherwise
This
is one reason of
why it is said to be wearing modern clothes are essential nowadays. Globalisation influences highly in the exchange of cultures. Due to Change preposition
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this
people are experimenting new
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with new
dresses
along with others culture
. Fix the agreement mistake
other cultures
This
trend will equalise all the people without any comparison. For example
, keralites
are now on the path of wearing modern Change the capitalization
Keralites
dresses
rather than their traditional dresses
kutha and dhothi
. Correct your spelling
dhoti
This
updations make them Change the determiner
These
to
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apply
with stand
in the modern world. Correct your spelling
withstand
This
is the main positive side of wearing fashionable dresses
.
In conclusion, it is both
said that fashionable dress has both
positive and negative side however
its benefits overwhelmed the counterpart.Submitted by JerryD on
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