Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding the changes. Others, however think that changes is always a good thing. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

A decent amount of individuals are of the opinion that hard work guarantees financial benefit, while others believe that it is not the only thing that helps in achieving

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goal.

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hard work comes financial stability,

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it is not the only thing contributing to

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.

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, it is clear that being a hard

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usually brings

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decent capital. A person, who dedicates himself entirely to the craft that he is doing, will be more successful rather than a person who awaits success falling at him from the sky. A famous entrepreneur Jack Ma is a prime example of

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. On his path to

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he struggled to find at least one decent job,

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after years of

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he

finally

managed to become one of the most successful entrepreneurs in the world with

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net worth of $51 billion.

Nonetheless

, having years of backbreaking labour doesn’t always guarantee success. There

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a plethora of other factors accompanying

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,

for instance

, children of famous businessmen or famous celebrities achieved

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with zero

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. Kardashian-Jenner family is a perfect example of

this

. Being the children of famous influential people has helped them achieve popularity and wealth without striving for it. It is

therefore

agreed that struggle doesn’t usually guarantee success,

on the contrary

, there are many other aspects to it. In conclusion, while many people know that hard work doesn’t guarantee financial independence, some still believe that in order to achieve something in your life, you have to put a lot of effort into it.

However

, there are many examples of individuals who didn’t go through the dogs and the quicksand on their path to victory.