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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#diet #meat #health
It is evident that eating
meat
 causes serious health issues. Some people perceive that if everyone adopts to
vegetarian
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diet
,
then
 is
issue
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an issue
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 can be talked
.
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 I firmly believe that shifting to vegan meals can help improve your health condition.
Firstly
, there are plethora
reasons
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of reasons
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 why we should turn vegan and stop eating
meat
.
Primary
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The primary
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 reason being that vegetarian
diet
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diets
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 are cheaper and more healthy.
Moreover
,
such
 diets are more widely available and accessible for the rich and poor citizens.
Plant based
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Plant-based
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 food provides us
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necessary vitamins,
such
 as fibre
that is
 important for improving our immunity. On one hand, a certain portion of
meat
 is necessary for a balanced
diet
 because it contains protein, calcium and other vitamins.
Nevertheless
, these can be
also
 gained from alternative sources like beans, mushrooms and nuts.
For example
, it is true that eating
meat
 provides us
iron
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 which is essential for our growth but green leafy vegetables are
also
 rich in iron.
Secondly
, there is no scientific evidence of disease transfer to humans from consuming plants.
On the contrary
, it is certain that there can be
transfer
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a transfer
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 of
disease causing
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disease-causing
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 pathogens like
virus
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viruses
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, bacteria from animals to humans on their consumption.
For example
, the novel
corona virus
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coronavirus
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 was
viral
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a viral
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 disease affecting the animals but it got exposed to the human population upon the consumption of a bat that was carrying the virus. To conclude, I stand by my opinion that changing our meals to
plant based
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plant-based
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 food improves our health. Since
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vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
 is far more beneficial than
meat
, we should choose wisely and reduce our
meat
 consumption.
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