Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are some

people

who agree with the opinion which says the parent’s

advice

has to

be follows

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by children and the other

refuse

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it. While there may some advantages via giving

advice

by elder generation, it seems to me, children must have their own

way

to live. On the one hand, the advocates of elder generations’ protreptic

believes

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that the mother and fathers recognize right from wrong more. A case in point is that they know how to spend their money in

beneficial

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way

or invest

the

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fund much more than young

people

.

Furthermore

, the parents are more experienced in a

way

that they have had several years more than the youth to test variable situations in their life. Some of these experiments helped them to rise in their job or life and some fell them into

troubles

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.

On the other hand

, following the sheer parents’

advice

have its disadvantages

such

as the fact that it destroys youth’s self-confidence and

lead

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them to become independent

people

when they grow up.

For instance

, once they want to marry and establish their dependent life from their immediate family, they will have many headaches to tell their opinion or even their needs to their spouse.

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, follow only

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parental guidance without any risks, is likely to demolish the children’s innovation. The worst effect of

this

point

,

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is the fear

from

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doing anything unexperienced,

therefore

there will be no improvement in the career,

for example

. From my point of view, while parents’

advice

may

depicts

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a certain

way

to the children as it had been experienced before,

these kind

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this kind

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of guidance cannot make better

people

in

the

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society. Each person should have his or her own

life-style

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lifestyle

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by acting in one’s own

way

to be happy starting from their childhood. The world is expanding via new events and facilities which our ancestors did not face

to

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them

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. We need more confident and dependent folk with innovative ideas to match with new technologies and make the world to be a better place

for

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to

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live

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life

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. In conclusion, following in the

parents

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parent's

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footsteps may possess its advantages and disadvantages which to me the negative points are much more.